|Reviews for The Beauty of Freedom|
| XxTigerLilyxX 4/22/13 . chapter 11
Yay! We get to read about the arena much more, I get the general idea of it! But it sounds spooky, though district three and eight will have an advantage as they mainly work in factories/warehouses back at their district.
Though I wonder how the tributes are going to find food and water! This arena is certainly very different from the 74th Hunger Games one, and I imagine it'll leave Cashmere a lot of nightmares by the end of this.
| XxTigerLilyxX 4/22/13 . chapter 10
Oooh nice, I like the arena you made up! It's inventive and original, though I really wish Cashmere could head outside so the reader can see what the rest of the arena's like! It can't be just that little room!
| XxTigerLilyxX 4/22/13 . chapter 9
This chapter was good and suspenseful, I can't wait to see what the arena is like this year! Maybe it's a jungle or something green because Caesar sometimes gives hints to the arena is his clothing and he was wearing lime green for his interview!
| XxTigerLilyxX 4/22/13 . chapter 8
Nice chapter, I can't wait for the interview!
It's good to see that Cashmere is still on top of the betting!
| XxTigerLilyxX 4/22/13 . chapter 7
It's good. I see Cashmere has a bit of a romance with Falco, that's original. I don't think I've read any other fanfiction where the tribute falls in love with the escort!
| XxTigerLilyxX 4/22/13 . chapter 6
I love the imagery and Sheen shouldn't be that angry, because whatever money Cashmere earns, would be in the District One account, which Sheen shares and I'm pretty sure Lace is more then happy to spend the majority of the money on Sheen rather then Cashmere.
| XxTigerLilyxX 4/21/13 . chapter 5
Okay, this is an okay chapter.
So far nothing much is happening though :((
I hope there's more action in the next few chapters!
| XxTigerLilyxX 4/21/13 . chapter 4
Okay, here's my review.
This is good, your writing style is very smooth and I get what's going on in the story.
However it's a bit boring because it's so long and there is little description in terms of metaphors/similies/personification and action.
Just Cashmere narrating her thoughts in tedious long sentences that use little figurative language.
But I do want to know what happens in the actual Hunger Games so I'll read on!
| XxTigerLilyxX 4/21/13 . chapter 3
I enjoyed reading it, and I can't wait for the opening ceremonies!
| XxTigerLilyxX 4/21/13 . chapter 2
Interesting, this chapter is good, though a little long.
I got kind of confused by Cashmere's mind games though, seeing as I'm not much of a manipulative person so I didn't really understand what she was trying to do. And Falco sounds more annoying then Effie, because at least Effie doesn't interrogate Peeta and Katniss and give them infuriating nicknames!
I can't wait to keep reading, about Cashmere's Hunger Games and how she survives!
| XxTigerLilyxX 4/21/13 . chapter 1
Yep I've gotton this far and I think it's great!
I can't wait to read more, and I like this background information about Cashmere in this chapter. I think her name is fitting, especially as her father loves money so it'll make sense why he named her that.
| GraeSeaShore 4/11/13 . chapter 1
Love the story so far! It's really awesome, and I really like your portrayal of Cashmere. Really interesting, and I can't wait to read more!
| TrackerJackson 3/25/13 . chapter 1
I just keep reading this trilogy over and over, and each time I become even more in love with you as an author, and the wonderful hidden secrets that this story holds.
| SaraAzureCashmer 3/9/13 . chapter 13
| Clove1113 3/5/13 . chapter 16
Now that was the sad chapter. First district 4, then Dahlia. All so sad.