Very nice! Can't wait to read more.

This looks very interesting. Very nicely written. Can't wait to read more.

luv the h/c

Very well written, but one problem...you spelled Coruscant wrong, but that's okay, it's only one problem. So far so good! Cannot wait to read more.

Only two words great story

Please update soon

Interesting take on Obi-Wan's imprisonment. I look forward to Anakin attempting to heal his master.

Ventress, you are such a... Never mind. Rule number one, Don't yell at fictional characters. Rule number two, no begging like a baby for updates. Rule number three, no wishing that Obi-Wan showed more emotions on the Clone Wars because he's the best character in it...

Anyway, lovely story you've written! I'm glad I came across it and I hope you update it soon!

charliebrown1234

Like. Like. LIKE! I've never really thought of Obi-Wan as a rape victim, but theres a first time for everything. Its a good story with a mind-reading Yoda, keep up the good work!

Okay, good so far and if you take this in the 'healing sex' direction I would think it reasonable. Anakin knows Obi-Wan would be mortified in the extreme to remember what Ventress had done to him, when he finally regains his senses, and that would be an interesting scene to find Anakin comforting his Master in that fashion. It could be G or M or whatever you'd feel comfortable writing. So, happy writing!

Well, I'm up for a h/c story as well as anyone else. The mask was interesting as a torture device and maybe why it left cuts and bruises when it's just a mask would be interesting? Was it put on too roughly? Did it extrude physical things, like knives or those muscle maggots, icky? Hope you continue!

keep up the great work thanks

I just read your fix and I...I...I LOVE IT! Please update soon. It's so wonderful. Please.

Oh my, what a story! I'm hooked on! It has such potential.

Please stay true to the story! No angst!

your the writer, a brilliant, talented, amazing writer, its your story, do as you please.

As for what you can do, you have a lot of options. mental and physical mainly. she could have left him in the dark for a while without food, striped him of the force, comeback, use his lightsaber against him and taunt him as he screams like question him being a Jedi, or "what would Qui-gon say now?" or maybe past lovers, get animals to do the job, nasty spiders, creepy-crawl-ies, use poisons and drugs for non-humans, then let flames engulf him, and lastly leave him to rot... in the dark so it will play with his mind.

Anyway, wonderful writing, keep it up! I look forward to more!

Ghost Lilly

i really like it so far . . . definetly has potential. (:

I don't really know what you shoule with story. Who the hell would want to think about an infected penis... um... that sounds like an STD! LOL

Anyway, these first two chapters are pretty good.