Five years is a long time to endure that. Man, if I were him I too would be wishing for death.

Keep writing. Even if your story is very dark with lots of... graphic? Torture. Yeah. Update soon.

So What happens next?

In a strange way i kinda like this. it is interesting.

DANM O_O

well,i dind't liked the first chapter,sometimes I didn't understand what was hapening for lack of description and the seond one it's WAY better _

AND WAY MORE BLODY T_T

I LIKED *_*

Decent enough fic.

Exceptionaly dark and bloody, I live for this! Malchoir is more like a demon than a dragon, cutting Gar open like that. This is a THE best story I've read, and it's only two chapters long so far. Keep it up, I'm loving this!

Update. I really like this story. I wanna see how it ends :P

This is a pretty good start, just don't go into detail about what happens between Raven and Malchior. I have an idea: have the next chapter begin right after Maldouche escapes and goes in persuit of Gar. Then have it go through what our evil minds created. Gar can learn what happened with Malchior from the Titans (brief overview) and from Raven herself (detailed description of his lies and yadda yadda, but keep it short).

I am hooked. Update soon