OH GOD! i hecka loved that! you are like a great author DUDE! i can't wait to read your other stories!

you have to post real soon ok -

That's great! and to think my b/f was worried about making out with the door open... lol. No, but that was good, and cute. You say you don't do one-shots often, I could see this continuing, but it's also good as is, except where'd Akane get the ice?

Na

O-kay...while I very much approve of Ranma and Akane having sex; having it in the backyard with Nabiki there is a bit too much. But hey, then again, both are such passionate creatures that they probably wouldn't give a damn about certain things when they have eachother to aim there passion on. Hot, definetly hot.

OMG! You have got to make this a fanfic. You did an excellent job with this one. I haven't read much of the Ranma fics yet (considering I jsut got into the manga not long ago) and I truly feel that this is not yet over. I also know it's been up for awhile, but you should really think about a sequel at least. you did some really nice work with this. Good job!

Twinstar1.

Equally awesome. I had read this before, but I forgot. It's cool that you're the author of both. Lol. This is one of the others in my top three. You have real talent, keep it up.-Irish

I think that this is a very good fanfic and makes a wonderful one-shot. But it would also give you a great begining to a full fanfic. I'm not telling you that you have to make it a fanfic. but if you decided to make it a fanfic then you have my full support all the way. But anyway it was a great one-shot. Akane and Ranma are ooc but I think that love and lust would do that to a person.

why only make this a one shot? its a good fanfiction. you should keep it going.

*grin* _

you really shouldn't make this a one-shot. it's really good and you should continue with this story. it's quit different than the oother stories which makes it shocking and unexpected to what happens next. please continue with this excellent story.

LOL. Well I dont care that Akane was OOC in this... its an awesome little one-shot. Thankyou so much for sharing.

-(Jacie)-

Cute! Don't think i can say much more than that.

how can you leave us like that plz plz plz plz plz CONTINUE quick quick

ohhhh yeah keep going there is a shortage of ranma and akane fics. In the next chapter put some lemon content in!

Great. Just not the best thing to read with someone you know sitting next to you, particulary if that someones a guy.

Hikari