wow great story please write more chapter do they get married is the dream a prophecy wow wow need lots more chapters for this story

very good! whana reade more about it.. )

Keep going PLEASE! This si so cute! Love the internal dialogue stuff!

Like it. You really like 'The Zeppo', don't you? (says the girl who's watched 'The Pack' 17 times)

help!
i'm stuck!
if anyone has any ideas, let me know - even better, if someone whats to collaborate and finish the story (or at least help write some of it) I'd really appreciate it!
I've kinda been overtaken by my CLex muse, and my Buffy slash has kinda been left behine.
THANX!
Beloved
x

That was so lovely and i cant say im happy that the chaps are so short but ill deal as long as there's more

good story I like the radio thing

this is pretty good! Just make the chapters a bit longer and it'll be great!

tht was hilaroous! specially the songs about sex! please, keep it up! please!

Aww, what a sweet story! I really hope you write some more of it :D And my favourite Buffy couple too!

An update! Yeah! And a great chapter! Can't wait for more. Poor Xander just couldn't get the right song!

nice, gentle development - liking this - and the radio conspiracy of sex is great! Like the interleaving of thoughts.

Only one thing that didn't strike the ear quite right - Spike thinking about Xander's eyes - that one lie's phrasing just jolted a bit.

Definatly want to see what happens in LA

Awww, cute story, more spike/xan please!

is this a spike&xander fic cause to me thats kinda gross

really good can't wait for more!