The story was fantastic; I really like how you did Scott and Xavier's relationship. Your style was also very compelling. Overall, I really enjoyed it. However (this is kinda like a "but", only different) I would like to see some spaces between paragraphs and quotes ("...") around the dialogue. The lack of made it a little difficult to read, but I'm really glad I kept reading. But who knows, maybe you've written something new with better formatting. But either way, I absolutely loved the story, and hope you keep writing.

Wow. Oh, just wow. The emotion running through this story is so deep... It kinda just wrenched the pit of my stomach. Love it so much.

-Zandra :3

This is so sweet! Scott is so wonderful and I've always thought that he would consider the Professor his father.

Great job!

G.S.1307

That was beautiful!

Chip

ok, i actually cried. great job

Wow. That was so beautiful. You write emotions so well. Thank you for that, I enjoyed it immensely. The format could use a little work, maybe line spaces between paragraphs so that it's easier to read? Otherwise, excellent writing, please, write more!

Such a sweet story...I really enjoyed reading it.

The title sucked, but there was Xavier in the summary and - for a change - not in conncetion with "anti", so I read it. A well-written story, I enjoyed it. Maybe a bit too religious for my taste, but then I was warned. I'd like to see more Xavier-fics like this. Why don't you try something with a little more action? :)

What a great story!

Very strong and beautiful emotions!

Ivy

you should write more about scott growing up with the professor im really interested to read stories like that and no one has written somehing like that.

good story by the way