Love this.

OMG! That's Totally Something To Do. Hum The Theme To The 8 O'Clock News While Giving Your BF A BJ. XD

"Do you still have your old uniform? Not for now, obviously, but it could be fun later." OMG SHAWN! I Bet He'd Like The Cop Play. XD

Sexy Little Chapter. X3

*Laughs* Great story! Very amusing, and very Shassie. Loved it.

It was good :) I liked the role reversal lol

Don't feel bad! Sex scenes can be hard to write. And you wrote this INCREDIBLY well! It was - weirdly - tasteful, and the dialogue was great. (Already better than 98% of smut.) The writing is wonderful, and the story was great. I always love reading your fics!

Squee That was beautiful That's all I can say. No comment is going to do the story justice!

Yeah Gus would be begging Shawn to keep the shirt away from him. Shawn's always stealing Gus's clothes.

Excellent job.

"Shawn had been adamant that if he was going to smell like a saloon from the old west, he might as well go where the guns were."

LOL. I found that very amusing. I am also exhausted and should be sleeping-but I am heading over to LJ now to read the new M/R.

This was super hot, btw. I love how IC Shawn and Lassie are. You have their banter nailed.

Sex scenes are difficult to write, my friend. It takes me hours to get one itsy bitsy part done. xD Still, ya did good!

W-O-W they were in character and it was HAWTTTTT Don't worry, this was plenty good as is, you don't need to "grow a pair" for this to be a great fanfic! ShaunXLassie is my guilty pleasure XD

love it!

I thought you did really good with the smutty scene. Very hot! Shawn and Lassiter were in character too. Great job!

"Maybe someday I'll grow a pair". Now, THAT would make an interesting next step in your ladder to the sex scene. Haha! Excellent work!