|Reviews for Newborn|
| TwilightLovarr 6/6/10 . chapter 1
Wow, this was amazingly beautiful! I loved this! The last sentence almost made me cry:
"One knew that if the other were to die, that the remaining one would have no choice but to follow in their footsteps and cease to exist as well."
So touching. Thank you for writing this.
| ShamelessFlames 6/6/10 . chapter 1
It seems kind of... undramatic. Other than that, your grammar's pretty good and I like the idea.