What's the point?

Holy. Crap. This was good. The imagery was amazing...and you were just so good at evoking emotion. Like, I am seriously sad right now. Poor Luna!

"She feels like a fool for the very first time."

AHHHH! STUPID NEVILLE! HE BELONGS WITH LUNA!

Amazing job 3

LOVE.

And that's all I can say.

I loves me my angst.

A perfect fic, right up until you mention Hannah! And even then, its better than most ;)

They so belong together, and it breaks my little shipper heart every time I remember Hannah :(

Well done! I love it, a very cute little drabble.

3MR

I love the innocence of Luna, and how she says 'maybe you'd like to marry me instead' like a child, in a way. This is so perfect, and I wish this pairing was actually cannon (it should have been!) because they fit so well together, and you captured them perfectly in this.

Ouch. Poor Luna, loving someone who doesn't love her. Very touching, very insightful. Keep writing

My heart broke after that! I honestly that that Luna and Nevielle would end up together. It was an excellent job!

Aw. This is cute, sad but cute. I love your descriptions - the staining of Neville's teeth, and the potpourri smell of of Luna's hair. I think you captured Luna's essence and naivety perfectly. This is beautiful. Well done )