|Reviews for Harry potter X|
| grimmich 11/28/12 . chapter 3
NOOO NO GINNY PLEASE! I like how Rogue was brought in though.
| grimmich 11/28/12 . chapter 2
awww poor harry... at least his dad understands. but what i don't get is why they didn't at least tell him of the magical world before...
| grimmich 11/28/12 . chapter 1
ummm slight glitches... 1, wouldn't the metal on his bones keep him from growing? so you kind of cursed him to be a 4 year old for the rest of his life, 2, all of the metal on his bones while not weighing as much as Logan's would still be pretty heavy so I don't think it would so easy for her to carry him... just thought I would point that out and hope I am wrong.
| IQvibe 11/9/12 . chapter 6
Where are u?!
| AEthereal Devastation 11/4/12 . chapter 6
An excellent story so far. My own vote is -1 ginny, and for four other girls. Thank you for your consideration of the reader's opinions.
| NightWithMoon 10/8/12 . chapter 1
it's legilimency (or something very close to that) also I noticed you said they tried bonding adamantium to his bones, but wouldn't that prevent all growth/developement and prevent him from being able to change shape?
finally the white strip of hair was something I always thought was the result of the stress Rogue went through when she was hooked up to Magnito's machine and not some visual representation of her mutation (therefore, why would it appear on harry).
| Anonymous 10/6/12 . chapter 1
For your an and 9/9 vision you should change it to 20/2 as the first number is the distance referece which is standardized at 20 feet. the 20/2 vision is the vision that Hawks have. So basically 9/9 20/20. imagine the / as a division sign so 9/91x and 20/210x(similar to a microscope). legilimency is the spelling. nice read you brake dialogue out of the paragraphs which makes reading easier thou punctuation is missing in some places it's not enough to distract from reading. if you do a rewrite the Xavier/Dumbledore meeting should be moved back till after harry awakes, or at least till after the doctor (jean/beast/whoever) says he's stable. it's a more realistic approach. sorry you can't respond back to me but i don't have an account hope this helps.
| danbear 10/4/12 . chapter 6
| Blackholelord 9/5/12 . chapter 6
Well its a nice story, I would like to vote for Jean Grey. I personally would actually like to see a story where Jean is not paired with Scott or Logan (the cannon Jean from X-Men). As for the rest I would like the "Harry/Rogue four girls 5" selection, not sure if that had won or not.
As for the current pairing, I actually like it, especially how you are making Rogue's life better in the story.
Also could you do a flashback chapter, about how Harry and Logan encounter x23, you have writen about her in the story, but nothing more. I would like to see how they encounter each other.
| Ferdawg 9/2/12 . chapter 6
this has been a good chapter, and i enjoyed reading it. as for the girls, i vote 1 Tonks, and Harry/Rogue Four girls...
and since i voted for the four girls i will tell you who i think they should be... Kitty, Wanda, Ginny, Tnoks. all thats with Rogue that will be 5 girls. i am just wandering if Harry has the sex stamina to make and please all those girls! _
| Guest 8/28/12 . chapter 2
| Flip Milner 8/25/12 . chapter 1
I vote for Ginny and kitty and I like the name Discharge.
| pocketpirate 8/17/12 . chapter 6
please update this soon! this story is amazing. i really want to see what happens next
| The Omniscient Phlegmatic 8/3/12 . chapter 6
great story, you should really continue it soon, if you get the time.
| Guest 7/21/12 . chapter 4
You call this a Godlike!Harry story? I've see hawaiians with more punch than this supposed 'Apocalypse Weapon'.