This is such a brilliant fic and I think you did a beautiful job writing it!

I HATE SEISHIRO SO, SO MUCH. GRRAHH. But an excellent fic.

And that is exactly what their relationship is all about.

ah, you portrayed seishirou-san so perfectly...his thoughts reguarding his subaru-kun are totally him!

well done!!

OUCH...just...ouch. That was so beautifully written, emotion so raw, just...ow...

I thought I had read all of the really good SxS fics already, but it seems I was mistaken. Not many people can portray Seishirou so well, let alone write an entire piece in his POV, but you did an excellent job.

;_; That was just...perfect. The characters, the story and it could all happen so easily in the series...*sniffle* Tissues Tisseues...

Very predatory...It was a good read. Not so heavy with angst as other stories.

Your use of lines from the text itself was excellent- I think you applied and interpreted them well. I have to admit it was a little confusing at first to follow the narration style, but by the end I understood where you were going. Your portrayal of Seishirou was (pardon the pun) dead on: the egotism, the possessiveness, the barely evident denial. And god, the whole thing was so poetic and descriptive too...You are very talented.

*Gaps*

O.O

Beautiful, simply beautiful... write more please!!! You captured both Seishirou and Subaru perfectly, it was gorgious. I really hope that you add more or make another part to this. I really enjoyed it! ^^

Wow! This was awesome, I loved the way you approached this and the characterization was right on target! I would love to see more!

drooooooooool.. i love it!!!!! and i thought i've read everything interesting bout my Sei-chan.. *shrugs*...

Wow. ;_; This is -really- beautiful. The tone you have is chilling and absolutely perfect. Again: wow. *_*

Great work!Write more ne?