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Reviews for: The Detention Club
TheUnderstatement 8/7/10 . chapter 1
Lovee :)
alittlefaithinme2 7/28/10 . chapter 1
i loved it! it was awesome! chad is so sweet sometimes
CosmicStarx 6/13/10 . chapter 1
great story and funny to lol
Ann Incorporated 6/9/10 . chapter 1
That was really funny! And I liked the ending a lot.

Some of the characters were a little OOC, but then again it's a parody. Awesome story!
linkinparkgirl1989 6/8/10 . chapter 1
awe, that was a really cute ending :D
Mlle. Madeline 6/7/10 . chapter 1
This was cute. Sad nobody but Chad remembered Sonny's birthday, though. Although I like his "farm girl" comment, hah.

This was the best part:

"Ooh, I know! We could make a jury!" Tawni said in delight. Grady excitedly added, "Cool! I want to be that girl from Legally Blonde!"

Awkward silence followed Grady's outburst. "Err...I meant I wanted to be a lawyer..."

Oh, I like the Breakfast Club title reference.

(You've confused "were" with "where" a lot, but that's the only real criticism I have.)
Emily 6/7/10 . chapter 1
I LOVED IT! You didn't skip to the channy part like other authors, and you have a great plot!
OneCrazyKickAssNinjaChick 6/7/10 . chapter 1
Chad is so sweet!

Awesome story :D
Emily 6/7/10 . chapter 1
You could have included a little more 'Channy' throughout the story by subtly hinting at the relationship rather than just leaving a few sentances untill the end, but it was cute and funny and a well thought out story. X
Sugar Rush4eva 6/6/10 . chapter 1
OMG kaliet! i had the exact same idea for a story! i was gonna call it the dinner club after the breakfast club!...i think ive been spending a little bit too much time with you...

anyways LOVED IT!

(dont say i never reviewed one of ur storires!)
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