Hmm, not the best. But I deff loved it and it was a sorta cute. Damn, Bella mustve been so embarrassed

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww that was well cute

At least she didn't walk in on them, that can scar a kid for life... i would know... shudder

! that was soooooo cute!

OMY! That was freakin funny

Oh lord! if i was there with Bella and Edward i'd laugh at them!

Lol. This is so cute.

Awww very cute.

Umm... *blushes*.. Edward takes it hard isn't he.

I really liked that one shot, it was really cute and totally something I could see happening to any parent. Loved it!

AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW

it was soooooooo cute i loved it!

I loved this one-shot! What a great idea! I thought the reaction was good, although Renesmee seemed to speak very clearly for a five year old, in my experience. Then again, I only know two five-year old's.

But either way, it was great. I really enjoyed it :)

Wonderful great very sweet in some moments if u know wat I mean

That was really good! It was bound to happen, right? I actually thought that this was realistic,unlike others that are similar, and I felt sorry for Edward, knowing he would never harm Bella.

Aw I loved this sooo cute this story is amazing!