Aw! They're so sweet together!

I actually read this one quite awhile ago and never commented. Now that I'm raiding your inventory (I think you have P/J stuff on here that I haven't seen either!), I figured it was the right thing to do to tell you how much I loved this. You nailed the apprehensiveness of both characters, and that's hard to do with Rachel since she projects herself as so together. Awesome job!

update soon awsome work

I thought this was really in character. Great job!

I love this!

I love the comments that they are making in their heads. Like, they want to be honest, but they just can't force the words out of their mouths.

Nicely done!

Aww, this was so sweet and hilarious too! I like the interaction about the morning after, it's just so true to their characters- it's quirky, surprising and funny.

You emphasise Rachel's confident facade so achingly well. Finn's denial and Rachel's desperate revelation is what makes their duo so premature.

The ending is so bittersweet because they're leaning on eachother but they secretly know it won't work this soon.

Can't wait to read more Finchel from you! :)