Wow, Heero is such a whore.

I tried to think of a better term for him but I simply can't. He's nothing but a whore, actually whore's are better than him they at least get paid.

He claims to care about his friends and their relationships (hello, getting married) yet at the drop of a hat he spreads his legs. Yes, in the story he claims that he didn't mean for it to happen but lets face the truth; it takes two to have sex, unless it's rape and what they experienced was not rape. Therefore he obvious meant it to happen.

I'm more surprised that he didn't sleep with any of the other men there (Wufei, Howard, etc.) he obvious isn't choosy. Your last lines prove that, especially when he says to Quatre that no he doesn't love him but feels fond of him. For how long? Until he can find someone else to screw?

I almost feel bad for Quatre but he knows full well what a creep Heero is so he deserves any unhappiness that will come to him in the future. And lets face it, someone who will willing cheat on and with those he considers friends won't hesitate to do so again. It only begs the question of when he'll sleep around on Quatre.

Overall the story had an interesting idea, especially the Duo/Trowa pairing, but the fact that you have all of the characters overlooking 'reality' for the sake of improbability ruined it for me.

In real-life few people are so stupid (or delusional) as to stick with cheaters (and I include Duo and Trowa in this) because there is no such thing as "it meant nothing," "it was a one-time thing," "I didn't mean for it to happen" or "I really love only you." Those are just excuse so that people can have their freedom and fun while still keeping a fallback plan.

I'm sorry for any harshness this review left you with, I'm not doing it to be mean but I do think that you could have done a better job. I do commend you for the hard work that you put into it but with the lack of sympathy created by, and for, the characters I simply found nothing to like about this story. Sorry.

wow,that was a very long story but I really like it,it was so funny especially the gifts part XD

Very good! _

HEY! Hi! Love the fic, I finally finished it, I had to take a few breaks cause it was a funny fic, a few minutes ago I had to take a break because I was laughing a lot and I got the hiccups.

Well, 23 is easily my least favorite pairing, but I took a gamble on this fic when I saw the 14. I was very pleasantly surprised with what I found. This was an excellent fic. I liked the way you showed Heero stumbling towards love with Quatre. Great fic!