put this onto fiction press ;) it's not related to the death gate cycle, it would benefit a lot more if it's on fictionpress :) not saying that the story's bad, of course

Oh, yes - this most certainly is a wrong place for a story like this.

Firstly, this isn't Death Gate Cycle fanfiction - secondly, this isn't fanfiction at all.

I highly support the idea of posting this somewhere else, because the people who actually are looking for DGC fanfiction would actually like to read fics they've been looking for.

Sorry for pointing this out but this almost seems like you've left it here for people (who've opened your story by accident) to read. Post it where it belongs, please - this is not a bad story. I think the best place would be .

Definitely the wrong category. You have to move it, because your fic is completety unrelated to Death Gate Cycle which is a fantasy series

Okay, I really think, that you put this story on the wrong place. (:

If this isn't fanfiction, you should put this fic on !

There you can make your own stories, and publish them. :)

I've been reading a lot of Death Gate Cycle - books, and I'm pretty sure, that this story is not fanfiction of DGC - series.