|Reviews for Enhanced Vision|
| chaosrin 2/10/13 . chapter 8
That letter is so Sonja-ish putting down her mind which i can so see that also the analysis of her reaction towards Lash. The Grand Chamberlain talking out the letter in a female tone for Kanbei is hilarious and it really speaks of Kanbei's love for his daughter. Thanks for updating and my bad for the delay in review.
| chaosrin 12/27/12 . chapter 7
Nice update don't see any mistakes and its been quite a while.
| TheBleachDoctor 12/12/12 . chapter 7
I love this story but why does it take a quarter of a year to update?
| chaosrin 10/27/12 . chapter 6
Always like the drama between Sonja and Lash.
Love the Lash filled interest. Still wish there's more sonja been a while since i
visit the advance war section. Anyway nice chapter and of the added details of the country is interesting.
Please do update this more often.
| TheBleachDoctor 7/28/12 . chapter 6
Oh, I thought this was dead!
| Trainalf 7/24/12 . chapter 6
It's short, but it's nice to see an update. So Lash IS up to something.
| Sudentor 5/20/12 . chapter 5
My finding this fic was the result of my attempting to look for Sonja/Lash yuri, which probably won't help raise any confidence on your part for my review. Nevertheless, allow me to say that this is one of the more well-written interpretations for Advance Wars that I've seen thus far. As a fairly "child-friendly" series, Advance Wars was always more cartoony than it was serious, and I'm rather impressed at how you managed to nail down the story to a spot closer towards reality, all without sacrificing the personalities and general levity of the characters by making them resemble actual real-life military leaders, something that likely would've made them darker and edgier. Even though the tone of the entire story was much more mature than anything Advance Wars 1, 2, and 3 ever presented, characterization of all the characters somehow remained spot-on, and I greatly applaud you for such.
Narratively, the story flows well even when you don't consider the adjustment in tone. Favorite parts so far include Sonja pelting an aide with anything not nailed down in frustrated anger (Sonja can be such a violent tsundere), Flak's inability to understand Colin's insults, and Sonja's episodes with Blue Moon's ministers. I'm mildly concerned by the pacing of the story when taking into account that you have stated this to be a Sonja/Lash fic and the general length of your chapters - Lash doesn't even make an appearance until "The After Party" - but you're good at keeping readers entertained until then, so that's a plus mark for me.
I'll be keeping an eye on this story, and hoping there will be an update soon. Heavens know you're writing for a medium that doesn't get enough attention, and your abilities deserve more credit.
| MessengerOfDreams 5/17/12 . chapter 5
I really do like this story. Everyone is in character, and I love the dynamic between Grit and Sonja. I notice your average updating speed is on the north side of several months, so I hope you get motivated to write more cause I'd love to read more!
| TheBleachDoctor 9/12/11 . chapter 4
| Edge of the night sky 8/23/11 . chapter 1
I like it.
| Ashvinoth 8/4/11 . chapter 4
Just when you've completely forgotten a story, all of a sudden an update comes.
While it was quite a bit shorter than I had been hoping for and the plot hasn't moved a great deal it was still an enjoyable read.
| scoutmasterkb28 2/28/11 . chapter 1
Nice start! You seem to know how to write motivational speeches as seen in Kanbei's talk. Keep up the good work!
| Ashvinoth 1/9/11 . chapter 3
Surprisingly awesome story so far dood. Great humor and characters that are pretty close to accurate. Hoping to see more sometime.
| Zac Attack 12/31/10 . chapter 3
Another great chapter. Liked Flak showing up, his dialogue was great. Really interested where the plot of this is leading. It's got me hooked.
| presidentuziel 9/7/10 . chapter 2
Well written, plenty of humor, and you got the characters spot-on. Good work, I can't wait to read more!