| Reviews for Tales of Bleach: Crossing Moons |
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draconichero21 12/27/10 . chapter 22Yes! Moonbeam! Lol Judith broke the roof Judith stepped forward next to Repede and poked at Jirobo's body. "Yep, he's dead." - lol. Would've been better though if she speared him through the head like at the end of Mass Effect 1 with Saren Was that Flynn's PS3 burst arte just now? At least four Ryoka? Aren't there 6? You're going to spawn a Yeager/Momo ship you realize that right? Man you could've at least made the fight a little more interesting as well as had Renji give Yuri that whole save Rukia speech he gave in canon |
Sony Ninja 12/12/10 . chapter 21hey sorry for not reviewing for awhile, been a little busy, still great chapters though I thought the kicking of Ikkaku's butt did seem a little much, he didn't even get a chance to fight back, that sucked, but other then that great job so till next time see |
Kamigawa Nagamaki 12/11/10 . chapter 15everyone that wishes for some kind of pairing with Yuri of any kind i luagh at that comment as Yuri's name means F/F love LOL it was a funny pun |
draconichero21 12/4/10 . chapter 21epic lol with the forgetting of the second part of the incantation. I can just imagine the looks of doom on everyone's faces Awesome Flynn's got the Arm of Power you didn't proofread it's canine not feline lol poor Karol you wanna go for a swim - lol priceless Could you please where a hat - epic lol Oh man Ikkaku got ripped Karol gets so easily amused...then again he's only 12 |
Gongondemon 11/18/10 . chapter 20 Heheheh...' teh' spelling error made me laugh...that was mean...YAY KAROL EXPLODING! |
Guest 11/18/10 . chapter 20 Lol poor Kaol got hit on the head I see Yeagers more than an extra. And like I said would it kill u to type in his accent? Awww Yeager that was a low blow to Momo lol Lol again poor Karol losing to Repede It's nice to have a protagonist like Yuri makes things funnier |
Gongondemon 11/11/10 . chapter 19 This story makes me laugh. And Yuri WOULD be the first one to throw a punch. |
draconichero21 11/8/10 . chapter 19I see even Yuri and Flynn find Kukaku's aesthetic taste to be rather unique Lol Karol is weirded out by Flynn's true colors So I take it that the Time Variance relationship is 3 to 1 then? 3 years per year Wow Flynn having fun there's three words I never thought I'd see strung together consecutively. You think we're overdoing the punching thing - actually no (lol) How are you supposed to be proud of quitting? - good question, very easy answer from Yuri lol The unison talking was a nice touch, shows how well Yuri and Flynn get along when it comes down to it Would it kill you to write Yeager's accent into his speech the same way I incorporate Luciella's in Ryoka Alliance? I can see what you mean about 3 ship teases with Kukaku Lol Ganju at: "Sis we're out of milk!" this whole thing is turning into a laugh riot until it gets more serious |
Gongondemon 11/7/10 . chapter 18 Yeager! Wow, nice twist, I was genuinly supprised. |
draconichero21 11/7/10 . chapter 18I only have one thing to say about the way Yuri said "Scuse me?" - YIKES! Oh that was funny. Despite the bludgeoning being censored that was funny. Wow you are really pushing the YuriYoru envelope here. I approve That noise you hear that's the sound of people fainting as they fall out of their chairs |
Sony Ninja 11/7/10 . chapter 18SWEET YEAGERS back sweet plot twist dude, can't wait for the next chapter and till then see |
Sony Ninja 11/6/10 . chapter 17sweet chapter sucks how Rita's not with them though, well anyway Gin proves he's badass and just an ass hehe well anyway till next time see |
draconichero21 11/6/10 . chapter 17Sheesh Rita's sure being a b!tch "A contract I'm not paying for" - epic typical Urahara lol "you shouldn't have worn all that armor Flynn" - Yuri is as snarky as always lol Uh Viz Midia much with the change in Yuri's release command? JIDANBO GOT CURBSTOMPED! And if you move from where you are Yuri when I fall asleep I will personally claw off your unmentionables." - EPIC LOL I know you hate Estelle but you could've had Karol or Judith be like "If only Estelle were here" and have Yuri or Flynn sink that line of thinking IMMEDIATELY |
Gongondemon 10/9/10 . chapter 16 I can't help but laugh at karols expense. Buy I'm pretty sure everyone else does the exact same thing. Also, just throwing this out there, what's going on with zagi and crap? You haven't mentioned him in a few chapters, so now I'm curious. |
Sony Ninja 10/8/10 . chapter 16and the training from hell continues, after dinner lol we don't want to piss off Tessai that's for sure, well great stuff again dude and I can't wait for the next so till then see |