   shadowarrior4god 1/5/07 . chapter 1i like it - |
| spootycup 7/13/04 . chapter 17 I really liked the story a lot. I am a big Leo Fan. It seems like there should be more. Please write. |
| Streetwyse 5/31/02 . chapter 1 Good plot and nice action. Cool to know that there's another girl to give the guys a run for their money. |
| Azure Turtle 5/5/02 . chapter 17 What a wonderful way to end the story! Kali, I absolutely loved this fic. The characterizations were wonderful, and Midori was such a cool character. I liked how she and Leo hooked up...it seems as though the serious leader has found something else to be serious about ) I also liked how you gave us some closure to the story, but you leave it open for a sequel. Taro's thoughts definitely leave the reader with a few unanswered questions. A very well done fic; I enjoyed reading it. Congrats on finishing! Now get working on that sequel already! D |
| Kaiya Mouri 5/5/02 . chapter 17 YAY! Leo finally gets the girl! GREAT STORY! |
| hexAdecimal 5/4/02 . chapter 17 I love the ending. just one question does Taro Kill himself at the end? |
| Lone Wolfette 5/3/02 . chapter 17 *applauds* Yay! That was great (& room left over for a possible sequel ;)
Loved it! Can't wait to see what you come up with next! |
| Azure Turtle 5/2/02 . chapter 16 Aww...that was a nice scene between Raph and Midori. I'm glad Master Splinter didn't punish them. Very well written, Kali! I can't wait to see how you wrap everything up ) |
| Saisei 5/1/02 . chapter 16 That's so sweet! This is definately what you call a happy ending, left wide open for a sequel (hint, hint...) ;) Get that epilogue up soon! |
| Azure Turtle 4/28/02 . chapter 15 An action-packed scene! I loved Midori's little scuffle with Taro. It's a good thing Raph was there to make the save! Very well done, Kali. |
| Lone Wolfette 4/28/02 . chapter 15 Oooh! More, please! ;) |
| Saisei 4/28/02 . chapter 15 This story's coming out great, Kali. I liked the comment about the cops and the sirens. Heheh...don't ya just love it when that happens? Nice job on slowly developing the thing between Midori and Leo, too. |
| Skeletoncrew 4/26/02 . chapter 14 I couldn't find any typos or anything, you write too well! I can't wait to find out whether the two of them save the day, or end up in need of rescue! |
| Azure Turtle 4/26/02 . chapter 14 Aw, it's nice to see Raph open up a bit. I really want to find out what happens next. Nice job on the characterizations, Kali. Good work as always. Keep 'em coming! |
| Lone Wolfette 4/25/02 . chapter 14 Oooooh! I loooove this fic! *jumps around happily* Yay! *stubs toe & crashes into a chair* Ow...
More, soon? ;) |
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