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Very good story. I enjoy Harry Potter fandom but not Twilight fandom really, so it was nice to read a good crossover with no corny romance and well written storyline.

Awesome story.

I fell in love with this. I have never in my life read anything like this, and I'm glad that I got the chance to. This was totally something amazing, and I love the way you wrote it. Pure masterpiece, in my opinion.

I really really enjoyed this story. I feel as though you built up all this wonderful circumstance and back story with Harry, and a budding interest from the Cullens. Then, it just ended. They killed him. While I understand the logic behind their desire to help and all, I almost feel as though his actual death and all deserved more description, more feeling. I didn't connect with the ending the way I did with the rest of the story.

I'm so shocked...just stunned by the ending.

This story is written so beautifully..and is so heartbreaking.

I hate it and love it at the same time...but mostly love it.

Tsuki

That was brilliant and sad as well.

I would have liked a MAJOR character death warning in this fic. I thought it would be one of the minors but hey.. you can't have everything.

As for the story itself... It's bit disappointed.

I have a good friend who's manic depressive and though there are days she's can't even be bothered to get out of bed or even speak, she's not suicidal as such.

And quite frankly the way you explained Harry's woes DON'T seem so bad. He has excellent friends who've stayed with him despite everything. He has friends that even invented products so he could live a normal life and Harry is soooo incredibly selfish that he can't see past his own nose.

Because that is what it boils down to. Suicide is the ULTIMATE selfish act and in no way, shape or form is Harry a selfish person, and you haven't portrayed him as such either.

SO, in the end, while well written it was NOT a convincing story

Cheers and good luck with future endeavors.

So sad! But I loved it!

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it is sad. nice twist ending though. only sad that even edward will forget harry as soon as bella "boring' swan ends up in Forks. honestly.

Even though I despise Twilight, this oneshot was friggen boss.

Very interesting story.

Good story, not really what i was expecting. And that "oh shit handle" is for cloths hangers. You'll notice that theres never one by the driver. People have to hang there dry clean cloths so they don't get wrinkled.

this was fantastic. i loved the characterizations, and the emmett parts, especially, because usually people focus on edward. (why they would focus on a stalker/borderline-abusive vampire, i've no idea).

great job! (and belated congratulations on your graduation ;))