Ooh. I really enjoyed this so far and I hope you continue it! It's so different and well written... and there aren't many stories on this site about Alora, so it's nice to read something about her past and see a different take on her.

Nice work )

Very nice chapter. Looking forward to the ext one.

I've always bee fascinated by Alora, or maybe twi'leks in general. Please finish this story. I want to see if Alora will redeem herself.

Wow

A great new story here.

Loved the interaction between the characters, and the new direction you took the story.

Thank you

Hmmm, that was good. I'm kinda surprised you haven't gotten any reviews yet... you should bribe people with cookies. That usually works xD

Anyway, I'd really like to read more ;) It's got a good plot going so far, and it would be interesting to see how it turns out. It was well written, very easy to feel the emotions in it. Ugh, I'm so bad a writing reviews.

Please post more :D