...especially when you say "came from the distant future of 2004" when Shinji's timeline has him from 2014 anyway, you know you've got a major plot crater,

Chapters 1-5:

Ooh, good looking fic! Can't wait for more!

Chapter 6:

Son.

I am disappoint.

I was introduced to familiar of zero with this fic i am thankful foe that ,it was really good in the beginning sadly last chapter has changed my opinion totally

What the fuck just happened? I'm suddenly really confused...

I think this fic is one of the best Zero no Tsukaima crossovers, very original and well written. I liked very much the generic 'awesomeness' but It feels a bit forced sometimes. But overall the fic is excelent.

I will read whatever you make. Till next time

Wait, whut? No, seriously, what? Undying vampire empress? Giant naked corpse Shinji? Demon god of mars? Killer berserk robots from mars? Multiple time-lines? ?

Yeah, I'm lost. Totally and utterly lost.

And, no offense, but that plotline you wrote up there in your author's notes? That's crazy even for you.

...I think I'm going to re-read Shinji and Warhammer40k. Despite everything, that one makes more sense than Points of Familiarity's supposedly eventual plot. Before it got shafted, anyways.

No need to apologize for going off the rails, on the contrary, the stations of canon are what makes most fanfiction boring.

Sad to see it end. I was really enjoying this one, and I've never even glimpsed the original Zero story.

Holy cow, what a twisted plot. Props for attempting to tackle it.

I eagerly await the next!

What?

So confused...

..whut? messed up man, messed up p That said, this fic was pretty awesome nevertheless. Looking back I was pretty much against all the future people bits though. didn't make much sense and read almost like a third crossover, one which I didn't know, which was pretty damn weird. Still, if I ignored those bits I really did enjoy the fic ) nearing the end it started to go a bit crazy, an awesome sort of crazy, but just a tad bit leaning on the crazy side.. then I remembered you wrote Shinji and WH40k and it was like "oh, that's right" p Normally I intensely dislike if an author drops a fic like this, spoiling the ending then promising a rewrite (more often than not then giving up after 2-3 chapters) But the way you ended this.. full of awesome but ending with Morphing Time!...yea, good riddance p and yet has me completely hooked for the rewrite p The spoiler bit was interesting, but again I found myself really against the whole time travel slant. Not exactly sure why. May be because they seem entirely disconnected from the main continuum? And the giant robots thing was a bit... eh... which might be centered entirely on the fact that Morphing Time was pretty much the last thing you mentioned in the fic -. - not quite sure how mechas work in written form, well, unless you have a template ready, but Power Rangers and etc just don't seem to fit - -" so not sure where you were going to take that idea.. Got to say, even if I didn't like the time travelling side of the future plot (including the whole Red Queen thing) I found the parts about planets particularly interesting. Having Mars as being an eldritch planet of horrors was interesting as well If I understood where you were taking it correctly? not sure if you were going for Lovecraftian or Power Rangers to be honest p Still, found the setting you crafted by mashing together Evangelion, Familiar of Zero, and the whole HellVenus thing fascinating p a plus if there was Lovecraftian horror as Mars as well. Really hope you get around to launching the rewrite soon p I think you got me hooked on to this genre in the beginning and I still can't find anyone who can write this anywhere near as good. even if this fic /has/ kind of carwrecked itself, on purpose? still, loved it and hope you churn out more stuffD

When you rewrite it, please make sure that the story can actually be followed. Plot complexity makes things interesting, but too much kills everything else, especially character development.

Too bad, Chapter 5 was so far my favourite; I loved the way it was shaping up. So, is there a re-do in the works, or is it dead?

It may be because my mycoplasma is returning. It might be that I haven't slept as much as I should. It might be a lot of things.

But I don't think this chapter made any sense.

Ah well.

What the hell happen at the end? Too strange for me. -_-

That too bad. I was really enjoying the first couple of chapters, but they have been declining... Maybe one day you'll do a reboot, just grab that first chapter and work things over from there?

Good luck!