Good start off. I miss Senna.

Still, you could work on your grammar...

Please I wanna know what happens next! Publish book 2 as soon as you can!

Please! You must continue this ASAP!

loooove it 3 some ideas for the next story: Ichigo and senna live in, I don't know, the valley ofsceams? But they decide to go to the real world not to be so bored. They go to karakura and run into a blank, but they've been evolving more so in the others memories that the two see if the person gets hurt they get hurt too, like if the person in the memory was cut of the face, so are they. So when they run into the blank, they are completely helpless and can just stand there creaming and clutching their head. Rukia and Renji were out hunting hollows when they hear people scream. They go and kill the blank. (just a thought, don't care either way, they could forget ichigo and senna) Ichigo and Senna can't go back to where they were because it became overcome with blanks. Now they have to find out what the blanks want from them, preferably before they go insane from the memories.

This story, it was amazing and sad at the same time. I loved it, and yet, I nearly cried when both Ichigo and Senna 'died'.
Yuyake

Why not have Ichigo and Senna appear in Soul Society a month or two after book one.
Most could have given up on Ichigo but Rukia. Rukia is depressed then becomes as cold as Byakuya was before Rukia was executed. Rukia sees Senna on Ichigo's shoulders just walking somewhere in Rukongai, District 72. Ichigo and Senna woke up in district 53 and since Ichigo was bitter about Senna's execution, they started looking for ways into the real world.
That's my suggestion for the second book. PLEASE WRITE IT!3

PLEASE WRITE THE SEQUAL SOON!
THIS STORY IS AWESOME! 3

FINE! ILL REVIEW IT!
In one word: EPIC

I recently found this fiction and I love it! The story is excellent and I really, really, really love Ichigo/Senna.

I know it said on your account that you are on hiatus, and you probably already got the story (hopefully) worked out for the next part but I still have to say, please do not make Ichigo/Senna meet up with the others too fast. Because it would be interesting to see them spend some time (a year or two, or perhaps a decade?) together alone and work on their relation, and as residents of soul society they barley age at all.

I loved this story and it's progression but my favorite part was how you depicted Soul Society. So many stories have them turn into beacons of justice or turn a blind eye or act incredibly different then the tradition bound government depicted. This was spot on despite how depressing it was.

Omagosh! *Cries and claps hand hysterically* SUCH A BEAUTIFUL STORY! :)
Can't wait for sequel! :$

-Frosty

I love how Senna and Ichigo bonded. Your story portrayed them well.

I. Love. This. Ending. I love it.

*Swoons* I hope when I look on your profile, that there's a sequel

That was literally beautiful and sad that I almost cried. I love how even in death Senna and Ichigo are together.

That was literally beautiful and sad that I almost cried. I love how even in death Senna and Ichigo are together.