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| Reviews for The Fresh Beat Band: A new Beginning |
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  nelly 10/28/12 . chapter 1 Hope youll listen can pretty please make a kiki and shout romance story |
| nelly 8/1/12 . chapter 1 I choose you to a love story abour kiki and shout! |
| nelly 8/1/12 . chapter 1 kiki and shout deserves a love story not just marina! |
| nelly 8/1/12 . chapter 1 Somebody needs to make one about kiki and shout being in love it seem one is gonna come! |
| The fresh beats biggest fan 6/24/12 . chapter 5 I love it! |
| nelly 5/29/12 . chapter 1 please make shout and kiki in love |
| nelly 5/29/12 . chapter 1 You should make one about SHOUT AND KIKI Going on a date |
 HersheyChocolates101 7/17/11 . chapter 6This is interesting, alright. |
| LunasMom 7/1/11 . chapter 6 seriously! update! lol.:D |
| LunasMom 7/1/11 . chapter 1 awww write more! |
| Kallik's Eternal 5/30/11 . chapter 6 Plz update soon! |
| lover 1/10/11 . chapter 6 u need more chapters its sooooooooooo good. |
| Mena'sOtherFics 11/17/10 . chapter 2 Lots of spelling and grammatical errors like confusing "you're" with "your". Not much narrative, too much dialogue. What's with the bold headings? Show, don't tell. It's way too simplistic and reads like you're about 12 years old. |
| Bella Phoenix MAC 10/5/10 . chapter 1 read your story this morning please write a sequel, Marina deserves to get her real first kiss from Twist hehe |
| Bella Phoenix MAC 10/5/10 . chapter 5 awesome writing Twist is soooooooooo hot, my niece and nephew LOVE the fresh beat band and so do I even though I'm almost 20 lol |
