 The Black Sluggard 6/14/10 . chapter 1This was interesting for me because something similar happened to me. Not the same details, but I told someone a lie when I was a kid that I completely forgot about. I didn't find out until much later that it had been believed and hurt them really badly. |
 Precious Pup 6/10/10 . chapter 1Awwwwww poor Tim and Tony would feel awful! I have considered this scenario too. Nicely written. Every member of the team just thinking what? confusion and then horror at the stupid waste of it all.
Would you consider continuing? Tim waking up and trying to understand what hapened to him and why? mGee andTony trying to repair and trust their relationship again? Tony being protective big brother out in the feild? |
 smilingT12 6/10/10 . chapter 1Ohhh, very nice. I always think some of those off hand comments should come home to roost. And maybe "badge bunnies" instead of "baggie bunnies"? |
 Wingstar102 6/10/10 . chapter 1*sniffle!* Why is everyone always mauling on Tim? Great story nonetheless. Poor Tim!
Love and cherries,
Wingstar |
 Emerald1 6/10/10 . chapter 1Very nice little scene of Tony-guilt. I love playing with the possibilities presented by that little joke of his. I have a couple brewing with both my profiles |
 Aunt Kitty 6/10/10 . chapter 1Oooooooooh.
Shiver.
I want to print this out and smack it in the face of every teen/young adult I hear smirking, "Oh, that's so gay!"
Excellent vignette (even though spell check slipped up a couple of times). Tony is going to be on a guilt trip with frequent flyer miles in the gazillions. |