I love this movie, this is a cute addition to the film :)

This is Really good!

Wonderful fic! Love this film and enjoyed your take one it - particularly the last paragraoh, tragiclly sad! Thank-you

Wouah !... J'espère que tu comprends un minimum le français, je vais me retrouver bien bête sinon !

Juste ... Wouah ! J'adore ce film, c'est mon film préféré, et je n'avais encore jamais pensé à venir regarder s'il existait une fic dessus ! C'est dit, je suis une idiote )

Et ta fic est juste magnifique, et je l'adore ! Donc merci de l'avoir écrit !

Loooved it!

I wish there were more stories for this movie. It was brilliant. Finding yours made my day a little brighter though. :)

It is so nice to know that someone else has seen this amazing movie as well. It's been a few years since I watched it, and now I feel like finding it and watching it again. This is a wonderful story, though I do have some advice for you. Whenever a new person speaks, it starts a new paragraph. Happy writings!

I loved total Eclipse,and I like how you created this nice piece of work from watching the spelling is very accurate and the punctuation is amazing.I got lost reading this piece of job two thumbs up to you my friend!

I can beleive you are the only one who wrote a fanfiction about this movie. I mean, how many yaoi fanfiction do we have here, exactly? And there we have, a true beautiful boys-love story full of love and pain, and there is just ONE fanfiction about it ! So paradoxal.

Anyway, I loved your story, and like you maybe I watched the whole movie longing to finally hear Arthur saying "I love you", words that, bitterly, never came.

"The only unbearable thing is that nothing is unbeatable."

Great work !

I love your story! I discovered Total Eclipse when some of my friends were making fun of Leonardo Dicaprio, for taking on a gay role. It annoyed me that they thought that way, so I bought the DVD. And it's such a beautiful story and wonderfully acted. This has to be one of my all time favorite movies and I'm glad there is atleast one story on FanFiction dedicated to it. And I love that quote too!

I love it! I am only beginning to dabble in this fandom but I love it already. This was well written with great grammar and spelling.