Great job! I enjoyed this one.

Lovely. :) This is a really intriguing idea, and you wrote it well. I think you also managed to keep Jackie in character but still allow her to be comforted by the Doctor, which was really nice to read.

that was great, i can just see that happening. he does seem to have problems with timing doesn't he?

That was really sweet!

I love it!

Very cute one-shot