not a bad fic just one thing. why Monzaemon?

Hmmm...interesting. On it's own, it's not bad, but it leaves you hanging. Maybe you should make a sequel where Sora, Mimi, and Kari are rescued? You could possibly turn it into a romance story if the guys rescue them.

AWSOME.

CAN YOU DO A KARI AND YOLIE FRIENDSHIP FIC AND HAVE KARI WEAR A LIGHT BLUE DENIM JACKET AND HAVE YOLIE PUSH KARI IN THE WATER PLEASE?