This story was so touching it nearly made me cry. Although, I don't think my family would appreciate finding me in tears. I happen to cry in very high volumes...

Sad, but I thought it was great!

Keep writing! :)

Uh... I... It was good. I'm partly speechless.

Amazing!

Aww. :(

Realistic, I believe, but sad. I like how you made Zaxy understanding and not emotionless as he is NOT an emotionless person (thank you very much). Hehee

I don't particularly have much to say, to be honest, I just though it deserved a review... ;