Heheheheh. Too good.

hmm well i think you forgot that roy can clap now, so he doesnt need the chalk. but still a nice story :D

Wow! This is one of my favorite Royai fics. I've probably reviewed this before, but I can't remember if I have and I can't miss the oppertunity to comment on something so well written! Please keep writing Royai, you've got a lot of skill. Great job!

I loved it!

It's awesome!

...Haha, Rebecca, you can't hit on Roy XDD He belongs to Riza

I loved the scene on the couch...and his uncertainty and confession were sooo sweet *_*

I really liked this story. I can really understand Rebecca's feelings towad Roy. I almost gagged to when I thought my friend was hot when I didnt know it was him. I wish i could drink to forget that moment but I'm a minor. Lol

Awww this was really cute!

Great work, as always. :D

Haha. Rebecca was so hilarious here :))

Love it. :P

This was really cute! I liked it.

nice story, love it

btw Roy doesnt need a chalk for his alchemy he can clap his hands now..

HAppy Royai Day

hahahah i remember when you told me about this idea nice job glompie *imagines hot, half naked men* hmmm i think i feel the need to find a tank..hahaha luvs hugs and pocky glompie

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Really loved the story. Got to say one of your best stories I've read so far. Still kind of depressed about the whole FMA ending but still, I think cow wanted that ending so that writers would be inspired to write what they thought should be the real ending. Cow didn't write an ending so that there would be like no definite end to what authors write. Sorry, kind of babbling now. -.-'

Great refit on the story, and are you happy with the manga's ending in that Roy and Riza didn't officially get together, yet Ed and Winry were able to have kids. I dislike the ending. Sorry to rattle on

Cute story, quick dialogues - not more descriptions than necessary. Fun and easy read... as they should be!

"Shit! Do you have your gun with you?"

"Where would I carry a gun in this outfit?"

-Haha, Oh I loved this. Much better than the sucky ending we read in 108. Thanks for posting this, and I have to say I wouldn't be surprise if Grumman gave the two his blessing.

(Btw, This isn't the first short story I've read where Riza is afraid of thunder - is that cannon?:S)

this is thrilling! update soon

Awww this was so cute )

It made me feel very happy. I felt kinda lost after i read chapter 108 but this story made my mood happy again Thank you.

And happy Royai day for you too!

Keep on going