|Reviews for subs|
| Rai-Kaze1 7/16/12 . chapter 1
What the hell is "clesha", if you don't mind my asking? Do you happen to mean "cliché"? Have you ever heard of grammar and punctuation? I'm sure this would be a decent story if I could actually understand what you were saying. There is this little invention called the comma. You should try it sometime. Many of your sentences are run-on and I honestly don't know how you've made it this far in life.
| TheatreGeek98 1/14/12 . chapter 1
I'm pretty sure this a troll, keep up the bad work.
| ih8h8rs 7/25/10 . chapter 1
duuude tis isn't even a fanfiction i should report you! but i won't, i guess...
| fish 7/22/10 . chapter 2
there is an eggplant right behind you
| a flamer 7/17/10 . chapter 1
Uhhh...sooooooo, you really really need to just totally rewrite it cuz I could not read a word of that.
| CyanideMangoOfMassDestruction 6/16/10 . chapter 2
You diefinitly need to fix spelling and grammar and stuff. But keep updating!
| butterfinger 6/15/10 . chapter 1
Good start. Is there more than two chapters? Before letting a teacher see it, check your spelling. I enjoyed it and admire your imagination. Keep up the good work.