What the hell is "clesha", if you don't mind my asking? Do you happen to mean "cliché"? Have you ever heard of grammar and punctuation? I'm sure this would be a decent story if I could actually understand what you were saying. There is this little invention called the comma. You should try it sometime. Many of your sentences are run-on and I honestly don't know how you've made it this far in life.

I'm pretty sure this a troll, keep up the bad work.

duuude tis isn't even a fanfiction i should report you! but i won't, i guess...

there is an eggplant right behind you

Uhhh...sooooooo, you really really need to just totally rewrite it cuz I could not read a word of that.

You diefinitly need to fix spelling and grammar and stuff. But keep updating!

Good start. Is there more than two chapters? Before letting a teacher see it, check your spelling. I enjoyed it and admire your imagination. Keep up the good work.