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Reviews for: Rest is Hard to Come By
MyWorldIsAnime 8/17/10 . chapter 1
D'awww huey can be so sweet.

Great fanfic.
The Mutant Rebel 8/16/10 . chapter 1
This was really good :D You're a really good writer

Keep on doing what you're doing
CRYBABY 8/15/10 . chapter 1
THAT IS A FRIKKGEN 10 ON DA CUTTE MEATAR!
Dave the Wordsmith 7/31/10 . chapter 1
Great piece here. I expected Huey to interact with Jazmine the way he did. On the other hand, who knew he would let himself act as Jazmine's pony? lol. Huey truly did have a heart.
Secrets4theunderground 6/30/10 . chapter 1
Aww I love them together! This was so sweet kinda sad but very sweet :)
BlueDolphin2011 6/15/10 . chapter 1
Poor Jazmine. Huey should have been able to tell that she was serious when she didn't start crying. All the characters aren't OOC. I love it.
Relaxing Pikachu 6/14/10 . chapter 1
Wow...this was so nicely written and in-character too! I loved it! Too bad it ends here. It would nice to know how things turn out for her parents.

Anyway, the whole "pony land" thing was interesting. I figured that she did know what was going on due to the fact that she didn't really react after Huey blurted it out. I guess the "pony land" set up is her escape from dealing with all the mess going on with her parents.

Wish I could come across more Boondocks fics where all the characters seem to be in-character. This was very well done!
Mr. Toffee 6/14/10 . chapter 1
This story was simply fantastic. You have done such an excellent job of capturing the relationship between Huey and Jazmine. There is no question that this is one of my favorites.
Dullard 6/12/10 . chapter 1
Jazmine's wild imagination seems to be a tad bit TOO wild, if you ask me. Slipping in and out of reality and 'pony land' can't be very healthy. ..I like the idea of it, though. It's as if she really is aware of the true state of affairs in her life, and is only pretending to believe the white lies that adults are hand-feeding her; that imaginary land being a sort of escape and something to distract herself from it all. It's an interesting and very creative trait that you've granted her. I think it adds a bit more depth to her character. More depth, I think, than what she'd probably ever originally be portrayed with.

Having read your other Boondocks fic (which I really need to go back and review at some point), I know that your take on Jazmine leaves her a tad more clever than she appears to be in the cartoon/comic. This, of course, stayed true in this oneshot as well. ..I like that, both here and there.

So, even with the minor, though very flattering new character traits that you've granted Jazmine, I feel that everyone remained perfectly, totally, very much believably in character; something that not all fan-fiction writers can successfully pull off. Not only that, but your descriptions, word flow, and chosen vocabulary was all very remarkable. Needless to say, I loved it. ..Also, your ending line was very, very cute.
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