im not sure weird as heel is enough to cover this

good story tho

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I LOVE YOU! lol. this story is great! I love fluffy, cute stuff. I like Spike calling Xander "Nummy" too. I'm adding you to my authur favorites list!

That was actually the second time I've read this little story and I liked it as much the second time as I did the first.
A few comments, use whitespace to your advantage! This story would be easier to read if you would separate out the lines of dialog and the thoughts.
Otherwise, it's a really good story. In my (of course) not so humble opinion, perhaps that little kiss down there at the end should be more a sweet timid little kiss because if someone is admitting for the first time that they like someone, much less a vampire who has tried to kill them *and* is male, I don't think it'd be quite so passionate initially. Again, just my opinion but it somewhat throws the story off because it's been sweetness & light until then and it's just a bit startling.
Anyway, thanks for writing, I do appreciate it.

yay! do that! this ine is so great! i love it!

aw, cute story :)