Wow I loved it! You honestly captured Homunculus beautifully and alot of people have trouble with that! So congrats on a great fanfic!

Bravo I loved the sweet bitterness and how you captured the characters. :D

happy to see a fic of those two. i love the game but there are hardly anything on them. Great job. Even though he isnt there with a body his soul is still w/homunculus in the end