hey continue this, its pretty nice...good job! :)

Um, are you going to continue? Cuz' this is really good. :) I wanna see the interactions between Erza and Gray as they talk about Ur. Please continue!

SQUEALING BECAUSE CUTE GRAYZA FLUFF QJDHSKJCJEJCJR "Again with the color!" Oh my gosh I laughed my butt off when I read that! It seems perfect for Erza to say! :D Update soon?

I can't wait for the next chapter.! This is the first fanfic that has to do with Ur, and I absolutely love it.. I always try to find ones about Gray and his memories about her but never found any until this.. It's amazing :)

Zomggg update plssss

I agree with the sickness idea _ great work and keep updating

OMG! PLEASE WRITE MORE! grays is like my fav! i also have a idea that gray gets sick ok maybe not likea cold cuz that would be werid cuz hes like a ice mage but he could have a rare sickness maybe done during a fight?

Nice story ! XD

YAY! Gray and Erza interaction! Once again, another wonderful chapter! I did take note that its been a year since you've updated. I hope you didn't entirely lose muse with this story and that in time you're able to update. I'll definitely be ready to read and review once you do! Keep up the great writing (whether it be here or somewhere else!) )

Wow! I really like this chapter. You did a great job at keeping everyone in character. I could very well see this playing out in the actual anime. ) On to chapter 3!

I'm slowly making my way through GraZa fanfics and I'm really glad I've stumbled across this one. I appreciate a good story, one that doesn't rush through the storyline but takes time to build the plot and the characters. Great start! I look forward to read the next chapter and hopefully seeing some interaction with Gray and Erza! )

Dear Kaoden:

Nice story! I noticed that in the first chapter, you spelled Gray's name with an 'a' while you spelled the colour with an 'e'. I do that too, it's nice to see someone else like that.

The ideas you've put into this story are interesting. Gray getting mad at Lucy and Natsu like that has happened before, and I can picture him doing that to the master with a situation like this, yet it's not something you'd really consider. I also liked your having Gray pound the snow and ice and bloody his hand. It's fun to do things like that to Gray.

At any rate, good story, I hope to see more soon.

Sincerely,

Master of the Hellish Yard

Erza's character change _ She became a ...bitch...but its cute! update soon.

I really like your story, so dont stop! Great job ! XD

please update! :)