|Reviews for In A Hail Of Gunfire|
| cruchot 3/10/13 . chapter 1
ohhhh so sad, but so beautiful ! I almost cried ! than you for this moment :D
| Moonlight1234 12/31/12 . chapter 1
Oh, no. TONY!MCGEE!GIBBS!Ziva...eh, I don't care for her.
Why must my three due awesome deaths?
Because they're awesome!
| Imagine The Dreamers 10/3/11 . chapter 1
wow! It's hard to believe that things like this actually happen!
| Darlin24 7/21/11 . chapter 1
whoa. this was so intense.
but it was really well written- extremely so!
i would hate to see the series end this way, but in all actuality, this would be best. if one person dies in the series finale, then you get the questions of "how do they deal, what happens, etc." but this way... theres closure.
| EllenJoeFan 5/12/11 . chapter 1
this was amazing 3
it shocked me how you killed everyone!
though i have to say do special agents wear bullet proof vests for that exact reason? so they dont die from gun shots to the chest and abdomen?
but it was really good
| GingerNinja1111 11/22/10 . chapter 1
Even though it is tragic that they died, it is how I would like them to die. Going down in glory. If there had to be a final episode of NCIS (*gasp*) it should end like this. You should write a second chapter, telling how Abby and Ducky deal with the deaths.
| NCISrocks 7/25/10 . chapter 1
oh my godness,
so sad...this is a really, really sad story. sniff.
| Redmannequin 6/30/10 . chapter 1
interesting... i like it :P
| LyssLovesTiva33 6/30/10 . chapter 1
Very well written but if somehow, something like this EVER happened... I think I'd die...
So sad but... well... you made me cry so that means it had to be amazing :)
| PT21 6/13/10 . chapter 1
Wow, God forbid this ever happening! Can you imagine the scenario? Wow, not a nice image ::shudder::
Thanks for giving us a food for thought
| DiNUTZzo 6/13/10 . chapter 1
well damn you, nearly had me crying at the end of that, very sad, keep writing!
| Angela On My Shoulder 6/13/10 . chapter 1
Good job, quite well written. You could have easily extended it though.
Making the shootout and/or standoff longer could provide added tension and suspense. For example: more ducking and weaving as they evaded their attackers, a chance for Tony and Ziva to find the bodies of Gibbs and McGee. I would end the shootout with a one-on-one between one of the arms dealers and a single remaining agent (personally, I'd pick Ziva) wanting to avenge her coworkers deaths as she slowly bled out. Although that could be a tad clichéd.
Alternatively, or in conjunction, you could add a scene to the end. Either the news being broken back at NCIS headquarters (that could be difficult to do) or a simple funeral scene.
I may sound critical, but I don't want you at all to feel disheartened. You did a great job. D
| It'sMyFavoriteSong 6/12/10 . chapter 1
well that was depressing... and yet, i liked it... in a morbid sort of way... haha, great job though :)
| Betherzz 6/12/10 . chapter 1
wow someone just doesnt like ncis very much at the moment... bad day? the whole team dead? thats wow... i dunno what to say
| Sparkiebunny 6/12/10 . chapter 1
Wow, so tragic...But great story :)