|Reviews for the fate of the world|
| 123GOHANZ 2/22/13 . chapter 1
So many things wrong with this.
1)Bardock died when Goku was a baby so Cari being 22 years younger than Goku is imposible
2)If Cari is a saiyan that means she would call Goku "Kakkorot" not Goku
I barely read half of the first chapter and I already find it horrible. Not gonna lie this sucks
| Monkeygirlz3 2/1/13 . chapter 8
well that was a pleasent mind jacking vison and also a nice person is here
| Monkeygirlz3 2/1/13 . chapter 4
okay that is super cute
| Guest 11/4/12 . chapter 9
| An Unknown girl from Johto 12/8/11 . chapter 1
This "Cari" girl can't be stronger than Goku. In the db, dbz, and dbgt world, no one is stronger than Goku. PERIOD. Also, her being SIX? Bardock was destined to die when planet vegeta blew up. So, yeah, this is crappy handiwork.
| ILoveDamon99 9/23/11 . chapter 8
one word -awesome!
| DemigodSuperSayian 6/14/11 . chapter 8
| PrismIris 5/13/11 . chapter 8
wow rely good stor so far.x)PLES POST SOON
| Guest 5/13/11 . chapter 1
this is a relly cool story, PLES POST MORE!XDXDXDXDXDXDXD
| darkmist11 9/23/10 . chapter 5