person of whatever gender stop letting this be all at a cliffhanger cuz i donts do that got it bcuz what happens to puck or artie or kurt i will hunt u down if u dont complete this story got it u son of a mothers sisters jackass

I really really enjoyed your story... you had tons of spelling errors. For instance: it's Fabray and semen... :-) and the part where Carole ended up with Mr Fabray was kinda creepy... :-) but over all...your story was really hott!

I reallly liked it :D It was very creative and for once I actually liked someone's made up character! One thing I didn't like about it was the story line was all over the place and sometimes hard to follow, everything quickly jumped from one place to another.

I would actually like to hear puck squeal like a girl when playing mario that would make my day and some lol

okay what the heck did puck not see what finn was doing? lol and they must be super close to not mind having the other doing that

For god's sake, what do you have against Rachel?

I hate it!

now it's getting a lot more intense. I loved Megan Fox in Transformers too. Too bad she won't be returning :(

This is an intresting story.

Oh, so it's gonna be a love triangle between Michel/Finn/Puck...very interesting

Wow that sucks for a first time poor guys. I wonder what will happen next?

interesting chapter

Definitely enjoyed! More please!