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PhoenixWytch 10/27/11 . chapter 2
Oh Roy... *sniffles and glares at Edward*

Thanks for writing.
Ooyuki-chan 4/27/11 . chapter 2
tell me more!tell me more!
Onyxlight 11/27/10 . chapter 2
Demands more as soon as you are able little lady _ I can't wait to see where this goes.
Onyxlight 11/26/10 . chapter 1
YAY more affair fic! I love these *hugs on you* You do know you, Nochicks and Rainjoy were the ones that roped me into Roy/Ed right?

Lynx
StarsV 8/18/10 . chapter 2
I kinda agree with Roy's logic in this situation, also I am extremely curious of why Edward of all people would even consider cheating!
AUehara 8/3/10 . chapter 2
Can I say that it took quite some time to be updated? But it's OK. Now now, things are moving on and they are going to do the shit huh? ... or not xP

Anyway, the chapter was good

Atsuko Uehara
blackfang13 7/22/10 . chapter 2
This is sooo gonna blow up in their faces. Affairs always do.

I feel sorry for the kids...mainly because I've been there.

I'm really interested in how you're going to continue this. And I want to know Ed's reasons for going outside his marriage. Maybe Winry hasn't been innocent either? (laughs)

I'll be waiting for your next update! :)
Charlotte -LOVE 7/20/10 . chapter 2
Love this! So much. Really... just the EdxRoy pairing is good - but your story is really nice too! I love the older Edward.
ireadtoomanybooks 7/20/10 . chapter 2
Oh Ed... you silly boy. I mean man. But I suppose having Roy Mustang... anyone would be tempted :D
adela1988 7/18/10 . chapter 2
It's quite sad to see Ed starting to worry about the money thing, but that's what life is like.

Love this chapter very much! I'm looking forward to the next update
ChaussetteGrise 7/17/10 . chapter 2
GREAT FIC ! :D

Can't wait for the next chap !
MARYLOVER 7/16/10 . chapter 2
I had read this chapter previously on your lj... XDD so well soon get to the hot? scenes, or is it that youre just warning us for angst?
Doublebend 7/16/10 . chapter 2
Ooh.

Even though I recently found out that I am no big fan of men leaving their wives and kids, for Ed and Roy I can make an exception.

Wow. This will lead to a major mess up. I'm REALLY looking forward to it *cackles*

Ahem. Keep it up!
Liz 7/14/10 . chapter 2
I always wonder why spouses would cheat but still claim to love their family... I feel bad for the kids. But still good chapter
extasy9121 7/13/10 . chapter 2
The fic looks great. You are a very good writer and you've started an interesting story. I look forward to seeing what happens next :)
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