Wow! Your writing style is awesome, I don't think you could have used better words and descriptions on this fic! Cloud and Squall sounds really intriguing! Though I'm not usually into yaoi, I've got to admit that it was worth the reading, plus commenting! :)

Wanna read more from you! :)

sweet jesus i realy enjoyed reading this! where are all the reviews at? *glares at fellow readers*

this was very well written, the description, the grammer, how u kept both squall and cloud in character, and u didnt make them sound girly at all! (thank god! wats the point of reading yaoi if the men are portrayed as feminine?) u really, gah im at a loss for words but i will try and explain wat im thinking, u really captured that MALE attraction, male thoughts and actions so well, you preserved their masculinity in this one shot and i love ya for it! i like how cloud said soo much without actually saying anything, squall's question "i want to see you in the light of the morning" had such a large underlying message in that sentence, and i loved it wen cloud realised wat squall meant. soo beautiful! well done with this, u should be proud of urself. i hope u continue with this pairing, whther that be a sequal to this or other stories. ]