good job :) plz continue

More!

'So how did I do? Was it alright? Are they in character? My main concern with most fanfiction story's on here is that Derek is never in character, and he acts to loving and sweet way too fast, and honestly, that's not him at all. . .maybe on the inside it is, but on the outside, Derek is still him, he's still award with Chloe, and he's still learning how to act with her when it comes to affection, and obviously it's hard for him. He wants her, but he's still Derek, and he's always thinking against what he wants' i agree with you completely, and you've done a great job so far of NOT doing this!

Omg you really need to freaking finish this story! Its AMAZING! You are really good at writing! :D

I'm really enjoying your work with Derek and Chloe. You make Derek seem so much more in character than some of the other stories on this site. I love Chlerek with all my heart, but some of the stories have Derek just so comfortable with their relationship in such a short time span. I feel like you really captured Derek's feelings. His actions are awkward with Chloe, but that seems more realistic, seeing as how both of them are new to the relationship. I really hope you continue with this story. Hoping to see Derek finally do something and just kiss her already. (Just wondering,but will the werewolf saliva become an issue in the kissing?)

Cute I like your story, update soon.

when are we getting the next chapter? :DD

I thought this was going to be a one-shot...now it's turning into a story! yey!

I really love Chlerek too. and I'm glad you made a lot of chlerek stories...)

Awesome story, that I hope you'll continue! I really like your writing style 'cause in my mind that counts as D-S-F(translation being Derek-style-fluff.

Happy holidays and update soon!

/M'Jane

you cant just end a story right when its getting to the good part u have to end it!

love love loveee cant wait for the next chapter! DD

I really liked it. Please update soon

I love it! They're starting to talk and get it all out which is good for them and will make them closer and stronger, just as long as Lauren doesn't get there early and ruin it! Update soon!

the story was really good but ifelt like it slowed down alot and the fourth chapter didn't really go anywhere. Otherwise Awesome story! Post soon!

I think the characterization and plot are great, but you might want to consider getting a beta, you have a good deal of spelling/typo/homophone errors that detract from the great aspects of your writing. I look forward to the next update :)