Ever considered asking someone to beta your writing?

Why did you watch SGU until Divided if you hate it this much? Oh yes, I've met people like you before on youtube and forums and I think I'll never understand you people. Are you masochist or what? But it has to be good if it inspired you to write, am I right?

I think that was a few more than 250, without the author's notes. There are about 70 words in that, and the word count is 367. So that's 297 words for the story itself. Yeah, I'm a nitpicker, I know. Sorry.

This was very funny, even if I disagree with your opinion on the show. Although I don't know why you watched it up until Divided if you thought it was so "crapy".

This is so terrible it may have actually given my eyes cancer. If you're going to write a story you could actually try your best and put something good down.