NOOOOOOO NOT A CLIFFHANGER! UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE! THIS STORY IS SO GOOD

NO! NOT LITTLE MARY! NOOOOOO!

I really like this by the way, well done, and we wouldn't judge you - we have no right- but could ye please toss in a bit more Cheapsides fines' curses? Could ye? Twud be right entertainin' it would, not that this ain't as it is. Is Charlie comin' to the rescue then? Please let 'im.

Cool. But, don't do the author's note at the top. No one will judge you, this is better than most of what's on the site. A few of the lines are centered, so you might want to fix that. It's a little short. Other than that, this was really well written and I really liked it. Nice one. So happy you wrote a fanfiction and you did a really good job for your first! :)