Oh man... Seifer and Quistis are my second favorite pairing. Hell, maybe even the first, but only cause prior to this fic I had yet to see anyone write it out so beautifully.

This line had me in fits: "Hey, look it's time to sacrifice Aunt Rinoa onto the barbeque fire, and then viciously challenge Uncle Squall to a gunblade duel over the last of the potato salad."

Many others too, but that one the most. I honestly love your writing, you are incredibly insightful AND have a great sense of humor, not to mention all the attention you give to detail...

Hey... I suppose that you get asked this very often, but have you done/considered any professional writing? I understand that you have a busy life... But really, you're a great writer, and I suppose you can only go so far writing fanfics.

It’s always a treat to receive a review even if almost seven years had passed since you wrote a fic.

Just goes to show how nice and timeless a Seiftis fic really is if written well.

Hehehe…good job on this Seiftis.

So beautiful! I love the conversation between the two characters, and the story is very sweet and lovely.

Loved it. I know its old work but that doesn't mean it doesn't need complimenting. I think your characterizations are damn accurate, and I could even tolerate Seifer's progress (which is amazing since I normally resent it in other fics). Well writen, great ideas. Well done.

*_* This was one of the first seiftis I read !

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It's beautiful !

i've read this a long time ago and im really sorry for reviewing just now. xD you never cease to amaze me in writing awesome stories in few words!

It's only been now that I've once again had the time to revisit fanfiction. And it's my first time to read some of your works.

I can't believe that's already the ending! It was really sweet how 'one dusk would forever remain etched in her memory'.

'Till then. Maybe I'll go read more of your brilliant works. Bye!

very profound. i love it. you've written this beautifully. keep writing and keep making people happy with your fics.

Very good story. I love how Seifer slowly opened up like that. Remembering pieces and bits of the past. Thought it was very interesting that you didn't make them hook up officially in the story, but they will continue to grow together. I did really like how you focus more on their pasts instead of Seifer's betrayal.

Aww, a powerful and sweet ending, with deep meaning. I didn't want it to end, but it had to. I liked the way it ended, most people make Quistis submissive and she directly ends up with the guy, but you took it slow, though it was only three chapters, and I liked it.

"It's going to happen." He said starting to walk on without her.

Now that was purely classic of Seifer. His smugness will never cease to charm me Well, that was great and I really enjoyed reading it. Continue on to write more Seifer and Quistis fics(not forcing, just urging if there is a difference). Well, until next we meet.

"I don't remember going to many family functions that involved sacrificing family members," he replied, acting light-hearted over his past mistakes. "Hey, look it's time to sacrifice Aunt Rinoa onto the barbeque fire, and then viciously challenge Uncle Squall to a gunblade duel over the last of the potato salad."

"Hey," Quistis laughed. "Actually I went to a few family outings that ended up like that. That might have been one of the better scenarios."

That part was hilarious. This chapter was even sweeter, it gave me butterflies. I see you're exploring a different, more sensitive side of Seifer, and I like it. He's so sweet an and cute. They do make a sweet couple, and I'm enjoying that.

Great job so far.

Aw, that was very sweet and entertaining. I loved Seifer and I was always wondering how he would react to romance, though I may be jumping a little too far ahead. I'm actually making a fic about Quistis and Seifer(just to experiment and see how well I perceive the two)and I read youre fic and it actually inspired me.

The first chapter really makes me want to read on, and I think I will. Wow! An adult writing for a game! I can't believe it. My parents hate the stuff, but now I have found solace in your taking the time out of your busy life just to share a few words of your imagination. That's pretty cool. Well, keep writing and inspiring gals like me.

Wonderful. Absolutely wonderful.

Kudos to you!

That was absolutely wonderful. *claps* I love reading fics about how Seifer feels after his defeat, and you managed to pull out the wounded, human side of Seifer out perfectly. Bravo!

"Well, I can tell you as a fact it's not perfect," she tried to say jokingly, although it came up flat. "But yeah…I mean it’s Squall Leonhart for Hyne’s sake... the guy who never went on a date in his life. For him love just walked in a cream-colored dress, and pointed to the stars. But those of us who were trying…we weren't so lucky."

That was beautiful...