Aw its so cute u should add

That was the first story I have most likey read that was written with the way the caracters actully act like. Very good job. Keep it up!

Update Soon!

good beginning to the story... just kinda wondering if tony is gonna be a jerk in this one, wake up and treat ziva like crap... with his comments not so sure how to see tony yet ;)

cant wait to see what comes next

Love it! I look forward to reading more! Yay! I'm new to Tive too, but this is an awesome story!

great start i liked it!