Just found this and I love it! The last line 'That is a moment he will always remember. A moment about which he will tease her in the years to come. The moment she was naked and made a Star Wars reference.' was very cool and so Tony.

Guh. PERFECT.

This story is great!Is there's any chance you could write a sequel?

I flailed a lot while reading your story. Absolutely loved it. You really captured Tony & Ziva's dynamic - the banter, their thinly veiled tenderness, & then their abandonment of all that is proper. :D It was fantastic.

Awesome job ! XP

Very well done :) I liked the mixture of sexy and sweet. There were actually many things I liked about this story, including your attention to detail. Ziva's gun under the pillow, Tony's composed exterior even while in an intense situation, the fact that he likes the real Ziva even better than his fantasies, the shared emotion between them...all very well though out tributes to two very fascinating characters and their relationship.

...love of course!

Perfect. Just perfect great work. Thank you for this

"Well... Gibbs is going to headslap me with a brick" BEST. LINE. EVER. You are definitely my new favorite Tiva author, just so's ya know ;P What an incredibly sweet story about finding love where you least expect it!

i'm fairly certain all of your fics are going to wind up on my favorites list.

good job.

This is my fantasy for Season 8 ! I just loved this, especially the fact that Tony and Ziva were both so surprised at how deep and meaningful it really was. Silly them! We've known all along it would be like this when they finally got together. ( Oh, and loved Tony saying Gibbs would head slap him with a brick,lol!).

Amazing story! Pure heaven! ]

the ending was sooooooooooo cute...the story is great...thank you so much for sharing :)

"Your bedside manner leaves something to be desired, David."

I read that line and right away my first thought was: She'll so you something to be desired!

You seriously are too awesome for words. There were parts that made me chuckle, and that made me laugh outright with glee. I loved the Official Ninja Assassin First Aid Kit bit because yeah, every ninja assassin needs to order one of them, its like a rule or something.

This is so far beyond awesome, all your fics are, I just you have made me lose all of my words. Do you know how hard it is for me to lose words? Pretty damn hard, those things are always spewing out of my mouth in some form or another.

Your lines were epic, the way you drew it all together brilliant, the execution of this entire thing PERFECT.

"Gibbs is going to head slap me with a brick." Could not have thought of a better line, you astound me with your amazingness. I am going to praise you quite a bit in this review ... I hope that you are ready. If not ... well get ready cause it is happening anyway.

I have a final tomorrow, and this put me at ease. Hell yeahs, I am going to pass now because this HAS got to be a sign from above. It does. You've given me a sign, it is all I needed to hear/read/whatever.

I love your writing style, I don't know if I have mentioned this ever before, but I honestly do. There is something about it that is just so YOU and no one could ever take that away or copy it. It is unique and I think you do it justice. One day, I hope to write something as amazing as you do. Will you be yoda and take me under your wing and make me a true Jedi? You won't? Well damn.

In all seriousness though, I am in awe of this. Kudos to you my friend. Your talents are astonishing. :]