This was an excellent story, great work! I especially loved the bits about the doll :)

Wow! Really enjoyed this story. I love Sirius taking care of young Harry, but I also love the actual relationship that developed in the books between teenage Harry and Sirius. This story had both. And the ending scene between the two was so precious. Great job!

Why don't you have paragraphs? The first couple of chapter you did, and now they're gone. It's just one big glob of text...

It's a good story, Harry's slightly OOC, but otherwise good.

Awwwwwwww. Hes so CUTE!

Very nice start!

OMG THIS WAS SO CUTE!

i want a 5-years old Harry! xD

awww

This was a wonderful story. I would have loved it to go on, but you did a great job with what you did.

Nice work; Im going to recommend this fan fic to my best friend who also recommended web of lies to me, since she thought it was really SWET.

Anyways,

I'll make sure to check out your other fan fics; when i read a fan fic i like, i always check out the other fan fics by the author.

You'll probably be reading reviews from me soon,

CreativeG

AW.

Im sorry if you feel like im being annoying or whatnot; it's just that it is overwhelmingly adorable(Harry-Sirius, Harry-remus

Not only is this fan fic well written,

but the emotion im feeling from all this is spectacular.

AW.

AW.

That last part was so adorable!

I didnt explain myself properly in the previous comment; i meant that this was the perfect place for me to stop reading.

You've done very well!

Congrats!

I think this was a nice place to stop reading; the right slight amount of suspense, but not the OMG, WILL HE DIE OR WILL HE LIVE? type suspense where you cannot stop.

That last part was FUNNY, in a superciliious, sarcastic sort of way. Crude humor.