I don't understand why people are being mean about this
I personally think its amazing although Remus was kinda mean in the past chapter, but I now see he's sorry for what he did.
I should probably stop typing or i'll make the whole story sound cheesy

Nooo! Evil remus! please, please, it's been over a year, but...update?

Just update sooon. Can't wait...

So so so out of character. Good idea though!

You also might want to get a beta :)

Hey this is really good! I don't know why some people cant see the fact that it is an alternate story line. I definitely think this could happen if Remus hadn't had a change of heart, so please update soon, and ignore the meanies! Good job!

is snape still alive? i really want to see his reaction to this situation...and remus is being really stupid. i think his brain has rotted to grain right now. i wonder what tonk's reaction would be to this situation...even though she is dead, she can always come back as a ghost or a person

dont terminate your account, i like this story, its different and different is good... and i totaly agree with you its a FANFICTION, thats why the website's called , I like the fact Remus didnt die and that Remus wants to make up for the time he missed with his son...

oh and WHO was in the FIRE... was it harry coming to get Teddy back?

Aw... Ignore the LOSERS who can't seem to understand the concept of what an ALTERNATE REALITY fanfic is. It's YOUR story, and you have a RIGHT to write it the way YOU want. If the jerks don't like it or understand that little fact, forget them and continue writing for those of us who actually DO like this story, and understand what the whole deal with Remus is like in this story.

Don't quit writing because a bunch of jerks are flaming you, and deny the people who actually LIKE this story the chance of seeing what happens next please.

I hope the Potters get Teddy back. Remus might be his birth father, and despite that he did what he did to Tonks and Teddy becuase of his work, the JERK still abandoned them. Harry and Ginny are the ones who've raised and loved Teddy all these years, not him. Yet he thinks he can just march in like nothing happened and take him back, with Kingsley and the ministry backing him because of his secret help with them that made him lose Tonks and Teddy in the first place?

don't stop! please. lol i like it. it clearly is au, so i dnt know why those people are being like that, but im enjoying it, and it appears others are too. you're the WRITER, and they 're READERS.. if they don't like what you WRITE then they don't have to READ. duh! lol sorry, i don't like meanies either. :) but i do like this, and i wanna see more. i wanna know who floo'd to remus'! lol i really hope you do continue this. you've got my support. writers should stick togethr. :) -anamolly2013

Please don't terminate your account. This story is too good to leave unfinished.

This is a great story and although it took me a little bit to understand the idea i would really like to see how it ends so please keep it going and dont let the bad reviews stop you

hi i hope you finish this story i really like what you have written, i understand if you are termiating your account will but you on alert just in case. dont let what i am assuming are rabid Remus fans discourge you because to be honest i dont think any of the marauders, would make very good parents. As teenagers they where a bunch of bullys and remus did nothing to stop them. I think that Harry would make a great parent because he would make sure that his kids didnt get neglected or abused because he had such a bad childhood. anyways sorry rant over after all this is a AU story and i could see that happening :-) hope you write more! oh ps your writing style is fine you dont need to defend it!

My dear lady. It saddens me when an author who is trying his or her best, put a story out there and 1 or 2 reviewers are callous enough to try and hurt him or her by lewd remarks. I found on author who tore int another author for writing her story strictly from the movies, while this person, who was also an author, stared 7 stories, and never finished them. Got tired of the whole Harry Potter thing after DH, is what this author said. If you enjoy writing, then do it for your self, and do not worry about your readers. If they like it, they will read. Remember, reviews are nice, but how many people read your story is even better. If you don't know how to do this let me know by answering this review. The Keeper.

Your portrayal of Remus is just so OOC, it's unrecognisable - it's not Remus Lupin, it's OC with the name tagged on it. Given how he saw sense after his argument with Harry, and how happy he was at the birth of his son, the idea that he would abandon him after the war was over esp if he didn't have a mother, new less prejudiced legislations were being made just makes no sense.

Continue if you want, but I certainly won't be reading this tosh anymore.

why did u make Tonks die. Why did you make Remus come back and not Tonks. Please invent a spell that can bring back the dead. Or I will never read this story again!1