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stopthenrewind 5/7/11 . chapter 1
Finn/Quinn/Puck/Rachel, seriously the most awesome OT4 there is on this show. This story was all kinds of awesome and sweet and funny at the same time, and everyone is just so spot on, it's crazy. I love this so much.
bored-now0809 2/21/11 . chapter 1
OMG- story totally made me cry twice. Once from laughing (because I loved when Quinn yelled at Puck and Finn) and once from the really touching scene at the end. Awesome job! Keep up the extraordinary emotional rollercoasters :)
A Sparkle and A Twirl 1/13/11 . chapter 1
"God is watching." Amazing line. It made me laugh out loud. Great!
SwayWithMe 12/12/10 . chapter 1
This may just be the cutest thing ever. I really think it is. I was laughing the whole way through. I could totally see Rachel taking charge of the situation and I love how you made Quinn make her stay. It was so very amusing and made me laugh so much. I love how you captured each character so well throughout the whole thing. When Finn said the thing about babies being born in cars all the time I almost died and it just seems so in character for him. Rachel and Puck were also amazingly in character.

I do have to say my favorite part may have been Rachel saying "You're joking with me. This is surprising. And… new" to Quinn. It made me smile. And it was definitely something Rachel would say. The end with the dash of PR with the Pooh Bear talk. Adorable. I really enjoyed this entire one shot. Amazing.
xokittyiunox 7/6/10 . chapter 1
One of my favorite stories :)
Cassprincess 6/24/10 . chapter 1
This is absolutely excellent!

And I just have to say, Yoshi and his dinosaur should take over the world. First up to eat? That fat little fucker Mario. :) Thanks for the super entertaining read!
twinkiecat 6/21/10 . chapter 1
I absolutely loved this one shot. You mixed the funny moments with the downright heartbreaking in a really interesting way that made me feel for all four of them. "Finn's got a good grip, and if he drops, the bulk of his incredible stupidity will cushion the fall. Fucking chill." is one of the funniest lines I've read in a long while and then Puck also makes a Pooh analogy and... i just about died. Great little story, off to try and make my way through your rather impressively large catalog of other stories now.
Foliee 6/19/10 . chapter 1
He's a good enough guy, sometimes. When he's not rambling about how Yoshi and his little green dinosaurs could take over the world if they were taller and weren't... well, cartoons.

That's so cute! hahaha. Love this story!
novice242 6/16/10 . chapter 1
Wow, great way to work in the prompts! The way you used Pooh so that Puck & Rachel were talking in code? And the way Quinn noticed! So amazing! Loved the man-hands line and Quinn's amusing comment that took Rachel a moment to comprehend! Ha!

Such a fun story with so many little gems!
samandy11 6/16/10 . chapter 1
"Are you talking in code, now?" Quinn rolls her eyes at them. "She totally gets you," she tells Puck. "That's a little scary."

Hilarious.

This was great! I miss Rachel's take charge attitude...it kind of died the last couple of episodes , for reasons I can understand. You are super duper, as was this story!
micahskitty 6/15/10 . chapter 1
LOVE IT. Oh man. It was so wonderful! YOU'RE so wonderful! Quinn and Rach being friends is the end of the world because they're both very headstrong and alpha females in their own ways- guess they have more in common than I thought. Anyhow, are you going to do anything to elaborate more on the Pooh thing at the end? It'd be a cute little story, maybe? Anyway, this was really cute!
LiveinLivingColor 6/14/10 . chapter 1
This made me smile so much. It's so crazy and SO Glee that I wish it had happened instead of what really occured in Journey. Some of the lines literally had me laughing out loud, and you wrote everyone really in character.
angstygoodness 6/14/10 . chapter 1
This is a great story! Love the quinn rachel friendship! Can't wait for the next chapter!
itsallgleektome 6/14/10 . chapter 1
That was really cute!
joker to the thief 6/14/10 . chapter 1
You don't know how hard I'm wishing that this is what actually happened on the show. And I'm kinda loving the shout-out to Yoshi.

I would not be entirely against you extending this into more than a oneshot, just so you know ;)
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