Intresting...

Is there more?

I hope so...

LOVE IT!

You know, that opening could have been SOOO many differant characters, and it would have fit them all to. _ Good job, lady. Can't wait for the next, whenever that is. So, onwards and downwrds ((can you tell I'm working my way DOWN you'r list? _)).

I really liked this prologue, and I hope you continue it soon. Even if I am a B/V fan, I do like Yamcha and feel he gets an undeserved bad rep. Afterall, Bulma doesn't seem to be holding any grudges against him later in the series. They are still friends. I can't wait to see your take on where Yamcha got those scars. I've always wondered about it myself.

aw, that was such a sweet home-coming... so yeah, all of a sudden i've had a taste for yamcha... glad to find this, it's ab fab! I can't possibly wait to see where you take this...

OOH! This one is very different from anything I've read. _ That's so neat! *giggles* Great job and I'd love to see how this progresses!

This was a nice begening and I like where this is going. I always did think that Yamcha adn Bulma were a cute couple. Anyway, I hope to read more of this series soon. Also, I can help beta read if you want. Later.

wow this is a really interesting concept and you have a very good writing style. I can't wait for your chapter...it's soo relieving to read a pro-Yamcha story the poor guy gets blasted in like 90% of the current fan fic.s because of Vegeta and Bulma romances..feh!He gets a bad reputation that he doesn't those people would just watch DragonBall they would see , any way I really like your story and await the nexr chapter with anticipation_

This looks like it's gonna totally rock, if you don't add more I'm gonna cry! I'm adding this to my favorites because it looks like it's gonna become a really awesome story, I've always wondered where Yamcha got his scars too.

-Strife

Hey, neat! It's not every day you read about the little things like Yamucha's scars! Keep writing, girl!

Nicely written so far. Keep going!

oooh! Interesting!

this is a very interesting idea to write about yamcha. a good idea and its different.

The quote at the beginning sets the story off nicely too (and a good quote too)

the characters thoughts were written well, well described too

hope you carry on with this keep it up _